This is the final draft of my double page spread. As suggested by my peers I have moved the page number "82" to the left hand side of the page and agree that this looks better and more typically follows conventions of magazines. It was also suggested that the closing paragraph blends in with the main text too much and I should change its colour or font. I felt that making the text a different colour would negatively affect the overall look of the page. Whilst looking through other magazines I saw that coloured squares were often used to represent the end of an article and break up chunks of text. I added a red square to the end of the main text of my article, this breaks up the text and the sticks to the colour palette. I also noticed that in my first and second draft I'd missed the word "it" off my quotation on the first page and rectified this.
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